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Page 3 of the Underground.
I had to use word bubbles this time, because otherwise there literally would have been no room for dialog in panel 2 thanks to Akira's ginormous backpack. The bubbles are, as you can probably tell, rather simply done. I just used the oval and polygon tools in MSPaint. Someday I'd like to get PaintShop or an actual manga program and do it properly, but for now this'll have to do.
Also, backgrounds take a long time. And even after I finished them, I'm still not entirely happy with how they turned out. I might eventually go back and add more detail in the backgrounds of panels 3 and 4 to make it more clear what's there. But at least those who've visited my parents' house ought to recognize things.
Let me know what you think about it. There are a few different things in this page that I'm unsure of, and I'd like to have feedback on how I can improve.
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Page 002: [link]
Page 004: [link]
I had to use word bubbles this time, because otherwise there literally would have been no room for dialog in panel 2 thanks to Akira's ginormous backpack. The bubbles are, as you can probably tell, rather simply done. I just used the oval and polygon tools in MSPaint. Someday I'd like to get PaintShop or an actual manga program and do it properly, but for now this'll have to do.
Also, backgrounds take a long time. And even after I finished them, I'm still not entirely happy with how they turned out. I might eventually go back and add more detail in the backgrounds of panels 3 and 4 to make it more clear what's there. But at least those who've visited my parents' house ought to recognize things.
Let me know what you think about it. There are a few different things in this page that I'm unsure of, and I'd like to have feedback on how I can improve.
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Page 004: [link]
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"This backpack would probably make a surprisingly lethal weapon."
Love that line. Probably cause it sounds like something I would say. 
And... the few times I was at your house I didn't pay all that much attention, but does you sidewalk really go on a hill like that? Course, I'm assuming that's a sidewalk, I really have no idea.
Love that line. Probably cause it sounds like something I would say. And... the few times I was at your house I didn't pay all that much attention, but does you sidewalk really go on a hill like that? Course, I'm assuming that's a sidewalk, I really have no idea.