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Underground 00-068

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Just so you know: I am thoroughly unhappy with the art on this page.  Hopefully this time it'll motivate me to improve rather than give up.  I drew the first panel backwards and had to mirror it on the computer, which resulted in Keiko's head looking weird because I am extremely right-hand dominant and don't notice how crooked my shapes are until I flip them around.  And speaking of hands, panel three took me forever.  Why is it so hard to draw someone with a hand over their mouth?

Oh, you're probably wondering about that dialog in the first panel . . . well, my friends, you see, this is what happens when I decide to tell a really awful bilingual pun.  When Keiko says "testy," Dai interprets it as "怒りん坊," which is a Japanese word for a short-tempered person.  The last part of that word, though, "坊," is also the term for a Buddhist priest, hence Daisuke's confusion.


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So... wait. Are they all supposed to be speaking Japanese? Cause... otherwise I don't see the point of Dai's mix up.